This web-page
has been designed specifically to assist students of ECE 110, Winter
2004, develop their outlines into final reports. It functions as a
more detailed supplement to the personal comments returned with the
marked outlines, and are to be used in conjunction with those comments.
Short
Report Guide | Other Outline and Report Writing Guides
| Assignment Problem Statement
1. ECE
110 Short Report Guide 2004:
There is one
remaining deliverable:
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The
Report: To be submitted in hard copy (to Engineering
Communication Centre at SFB670) and electronically (Microsoft
Word or WordPerfect format) before 4:00 pm on Friday Apr. 2nd
(e-mail to <writing@ecf.utoronto.ca>).
This guide has
been divided into several sections. These are indicative of the general
requirements for the report. They do not necessarily
correspond to required sections: the organization and structure of
the report is ultimately your decision. Each section identifies some
important considerations for the report, and explains ways to meet
the requirements set out in the assignment.
1.4 Evaluation
of Display Types
1.5 Conclusion
WARNING:
The examples provided in these pages are not meant to be imported
straight into your document, regardless of how attractive they may
look. The teaching assistants marking this project have all contributed
to this web-site, so they will be familiar with the material presented
here.
1.1 Problem
Statement:
Read and consider
the assignment problem statement carefully: it contains many clues
to the scope, purpose, tone, and structure of the report, even by
omitting information.
Your
editor at Scientific American has requested that you prepare
a technical report which describes the science/physics of
the CRT, its range of applications in home entertainment,
and its limitations in the ever evolving modern microelectronic
world. Identify briefly the range of emerging alternatives
to the CRT, including those likely to emerge in the future.
From these choose two generically different alternatives
and proceed to describe the scientific basis of the selected
projection devices. Compare and contrast these alternatives
and the CRT, discussing their strengths and weaknesses in
relation to their application for home entertainment. In
your discussion, consider factors such as energy consumption,
safety (radiation, eye strain, ...), and others. Conclude
by assessing the significance of the analysis (for example,
in view of your analysis what alternative(s) do you expect
to dominate (or not) and the reasons thereof). |
Here
are several (not all) considerations which immediately arise from close
consideration of the assignment:
1.1.1
Scope: Although this might seem self-evident, the initial
description does set rather strict constraints on content of the
report. By the description, we know that:
a.
The report is to focus on the principles of operation for different
types of display devices in home entertainment applications, and
not on specific devices themselves. In other words, you are not
to compare a SONY 43HDWS to a Samsung DLP30WHD (specific models),
but technologies against one another (e.g. LCD versus DLP). This
is especially important for the background section of the report,
where you are to explain the principles of operation for a technology
rather than a specific device. This is also an important consideration
in the evaluation section.
b. Though the report is about display technologies,
the focus is on their application in home entertainment. Hint:
This means that the home entertainment needs (which are now evolving
significantly) will help to establish the criteria for your evaluation.
c. The description tells you to compare at least
two, meaning that a discussion of how different display technologies
perform in home entertainment applications is required. You will
have to provide more than just a list of pluses and minuses. Hint:
doing substantially more than two may give you greater coverage
of the potential options, but will limit the detail in which you
can engage each type.
1.1.2
Audience: "Your editor at Scientific American has requested
that you prepare a technical report." While your primary audience
is an editor at Scientific American, it is likely that the magazine
is also considering the piece as a potential article (with revisions
of course). Both your editor and potential magazine readers
have specific needs. It suggests that your audience will be fairly
broad, including non-technical readers who may not normally read
a scientific paper. They may not be familiar with all the principles
behind display technologies or advances in home entertainment. However,
they are intelligent and keenly interested in the science behind
everyday devices, meaning that they will be capable of understanding
technical information, if presented and organized in a logical and
clear way. Hint: audience is an especially important consideration
for the background section.
1.1.3 Purpose/Tone: The requirements of the assignment
are explained above, and should tell you what kind of a report you
are writing. Try and determine, from the information above, what
the central purpose of the document is: Explanation? Evaluation?
Recommendation?
Now
that we're aware of some of the requirements/constraints placed on this
report, we need to move to the introduction. Click the right arrow to
go there.
1.2 Introduction:
The
introduction to this formal report serves several purposes:
1.2.1
It should state the purpose of the report. The
purpose statement is not a general statement of the subject area,
but a detailed statement that tells us what the report intends to
accomplish. Three Hints Here:
a.
You are given several requirements for the report: these are all
purposes, but you will need to decide which is the central purpose
– that is, which of these purposes are the others subordinate
to, or what are you ultimately trying to do. Make sure your a
purpose statement is equipped with a strong verb. Key:
Read the instructions for each section before coming to a final
purpose statement.
b. Remember the difference between problem and
the purpose of the report, and the relationship between the two:
the purpose addresses the problem that you are faced with.
c. An important consideration when formulating
your purpose, as well as the entire report, is your intended audience.
While your immediate audience is an editor at Scientific American,
the final audience may ultimately be the readers of the magazine
with a keen interest in the science behind technologies, who may
have limited
technical background and will need to know what you have learned
in class and through your readings.
Look at the following examples of purpose statements-none of them
quite right, some better than others-and what they are missing.
This
report discusses the operation of display technologies.
Or,
This report discusses the operation of a CRT, LCD, and Plasma
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Too
general; this is only more a statement of "scope" than of
"purpose." In particular, the verb "discusses" is too vague.
Furthermore, both sentences fail to identify the focus of
the paper's discussion correctly, concentrating on only
one aspect of the discussion (Fails to acknowledge element
of analysis). |
| I
have been asked to write a report about display technologies
to be submitted for ECE110. |
A
statement of the problem, rather than of the purpose of
the report. The difference between the two is in its tone,
not its substance. Obviously, something like this would
not go into the actual report. |
| The
purpose of this report is to explain the operation of display
technologies to an intelligent but non-technical reader. |
Not
only is this too general, but it deals with the issue of
audience incorrectly (As above, it also misses the above
analysis). The reader does not need to be told who s/he
is. Instead, address your audience through tone, style,
and diction. |
| The
purpose of the report is to explain the operation of display
technologies in home entertainment applications, showing
how the their importance. |
A
more focused purpose statement, but still doesn't get to
the point of the report, but it suffers from the same inaccurate
verb as above. It does tell the reader what the report will
do, but does not communicate the final goal or cover all
aspects of the report. (Comparison/Evaluation of types) |
d.
A more complete purpose statement would have emphasized the comparison
/ evaluation aspect more – different display technologies
- as this is an important aspect of the report.
1.2.2
It lays out the scope/context of the report. By
scope, we mean several things, including its general subject field,
basic background information, and the scenario you are facing. To
develop a context for the report, state the need for new display
technologies - to do this, you will have to explain how developments
in home entertainment applications have changed the requirements
for displays.
This contextual introduction is intended only as preliminary material
that narrows the focus of the report and allows the report to move
to its purpose statement (or to explain it, if it comes first).
Be careful, however, not to spend too much time on developing context
here, for several reasons:
a.
Any detailed discussion of the operation of display technologies
should come later.
b. Much of the background information needed
to understand the operation of displays has yet to be delivered,
including the definition of the general principles underlying
their operation.
c. Similarly, the need for new displays due to
developments in home entertainment should only be be mentioned
briefly, since this will also be a large part of the report and
because the readers will largely be familiar with them:
trying to explain this in detail in the introduction would be
"jumping the gun." However, you will have to, later on, analyse
what these need applications mean for display technologies.
1.2.3
It should also indicate how the report will be organized, paying especially
close attention to the connections between the different sections
of the report. In other words, it should be able to show the intended
structure of the report, indicating a progression from background
principles of the CRT and the alternatives, to what the specific requirements
of the new display technology are, to, finally, a comparative analysis
of different display types which also acknowledges the limitations,
advantages, and future of the technology in the field.
1.3 Background:
This
section is designed do several things:
1.3.1
CRT Function and Principles: This section defines
how a CRT works in detail, explaining the principles which govern
its operation - more simply, what the Cathode Ray Tube
is, what it does and how it does what it does. Doing this effectively,
however, is more complicated than it might seem, involving some
very specific strategies.
Before
you start, consider your audience (characteristics
defined above). Your specific audience will need several
things explained: 1) scientific terms, 2) terms with different
meanings in a scientific context, and 3) formulae or laws. You
will have to determine the level of information that is appropriate
for the audience. Beware, though: the danger of sounding condescending
to your reader is almost as prominent as being over technical.
1) Part
of the your description will involve a Mechanism
Description (the what), a list and description
of each of the major components of a CRT display. However, a
mechanism description is not sufficient because it doesn't explain
how they work together.
2) Thus,
another part of the description will involve Process
Description (the how), a list of the steps
and stages through which a CRT television displays a picture.
A mechanism and process description gives both the parts and
steps behind the technology, but is still incomplete, because
we still need the why (Read the ECC's pages
on Mechanism
and Process definitions)
3) This
is the most difficult part of the report, because it demands
that you apply some of your learning from this ECE110, your
understanding of the basics of science, to explain the principles
underlying the process. Which scientific principles govern
the operation of a CRT display? Why do the components behave
in the manner that they do? What laws or principles govern this
behavior?
You
might even use an analogy appropriate to your audience. Make
sure, however, that this analogy is well explained and that it applies
to the concept being explained.
1.3.2
Criteria: This section also needs to establish
the connection between these concepts (basic principles of
CRT display operation) and the more general purpose of the report.
You will have to clearly identify the new requirements of
display technologies brought about by new home entertainment applications.
That is, what do the changes in home entertainment mean for
new display technologies? What will they have to be capable of doing?
Many of these requirements can be found by analysing the limitations
of CRT displays, as they begin to be phased out . . . if you can
identify why CRTs are beginning to lose market share, you might
be able to find what features and capabilities consumers are now
asking for.
Therefore,
you should be identifying clear design criteria for a successor to
CRT displays which can satisfy consumers' home entertainment needs
and the CRT limitations. These are essential because you will be using
them to evaluate the two alternatives you are describing. These criteria
should also be prioritized; which ones, for example, are the most
important?
The design
criteria that you identify also need to be measurable:
terms like "cheap," "large screen," and "light" aren't precise enough
to be helpful. "Average cost equivalent or less than average CRT
prices for the same size screen," "capable of more 40 inch screens,"
and "less than 100 lbs for a 40inch TV" are more precise, and allow
for a more comprehensive discussion below. Keep in mind that these
precise criteria will also have to be justified.
1.3.3 Alternative Display Types: This section should
also identify and describe the display technologies which are under
consideration in the report. Some considerations here include:
a.
Identification: The scope of your report is an important
consideration here. Dealing with every single type of alternative
will allow the report to be comprehensive, but it might also reduce
the amount of detail you can provide on each type. Two is the
requirement; anything more than three means that it is very likely
that you won't be going into enough detail about the different
types, especially in the analysis section.
b.
Description: Although the display technologies may all
work on similar principles (some will work quite differently from
others), there are functional differences or differences in composition
between them. It is important that your report should describe
the principles behind each individual type, focusing especially
on any differences in composition, design, and
principles of operation. You should strive to do the same things
you did in the above description of CRT technologies (Mechanism,
Process, and Principles)
Finally,
make certain that these sections include the proper documentation.
You are expected to use sources to find your information, so it is
very important to cite the sources you are using, both to give the
authors credit and to give your paper authority. Please refer to the
Engineering
Communication Centre Documentation Page for help deciding when
and how to cite sources properly. FAILING
TO DOCUMENT PROPERLY WILL RESULT IN SIGNIFICANT PENALITIES; PLAGIARISM
WILL RESULT IN A 0 FOR THE REPORT AND DISCIPLINARY ACTION
1.4 Evaluation and Future
of Display Technologies:
There are several
major considerations for this section of the report. A list of advantages
and disadvantages for each display technology type is not
sufficient because it does not address the needs of the specific
portable device or provide an analysis of the choices.
1.4.1
Linked to Criteria: The evaluation of display types must
be clearly connected to the criteria identified in the above section
of the report. Remember, this report focuses on finding display types
suitable for current and future home entertainment applications. You
should be evaluating whether or not the display type meets or does
not meet the requirements set out above, rather than simply listing
their advantages and disadvantages. You should also make sure that
the listed advs/disadvs are relevant to the home entertainment applications.
1.4.2
Analysis Made Explicit: The evaluation must also conduct
an analysis of the display types - it must compare/contrast them
explicitly in terms of how they meet, fail to meet, or exceed the
criteria defined above, rather than depend on the reader to do this
on their own (A list of advs/disadvs would depend on the readers
to conduct the analysis themselves)
1.4.3
Future of the Technology: Based on their relative performance,
you are required to provide a recommendation for a battery type
to be used in this particular device. the recommendation should
be clearly linked to the criteria and justified
by the above analysis.Your recommendation, however,
should be multifaceted. It must consider the current state of the
technology in making a recommendation, but also should consider
both 1) the future needs of the home entertainment applications
(not just the current ones) and 2) the developments necessary for
the display technology type to become a the dominant technology
for display devices in the home.
1.5 Conclusion:
The main concern
with conclusions is how not to simply repeat the introduction or summarize
the report. But given all the information, connections, and data that
you have presented in the body of the report, this should not be an
issue. If you find that you can't help just repeating the introduction,
then there is probably a lack of substance in your report. Contrary
to popular belief, summary is not the primary goal of the conclusion.
The following strategies may help you develop an effective and engaging
conclusion:
a.
Any summary should directly engage and address your purpose statement.
If your purpose statement has been "to discuss" something, summarize
exactly what you have said about it; if it has been "to explain"
something, be sure to concisely restate the basic principles behind
the concept – how different technologies enable displays -
you're explaining; if it has been to evaluate something, be sure
to concisely restate the results/conclusions of the evaluation.
Furthermore, the summary (especially for a report of this length)
should not be more than one or two sentences long. Instead,
focus on the following two suggestions.
b.
Moving beyond mere summary, you might perhaps mention some of the
implications of your analysis of display types for home entertainment.
Again, this depends in large part on your imagination and creativity;
might it, for example, play a role in the expanding the way that
we think of home entertainment?
c.
Assume that your audience already knows the preliminary information,
such as the subject field, the background information, and the boundaries
of the paper, and perhaps gesture beyond them. What sorts of future
developments in these display technologies are on the horizon; what
sorts of changes/improvements will this development lead to (in
both our use of displays and the displays themselves)?
Hint: Given that your final
section also looked at the limitations/future of the technology,
you may want to consider this section an expansion of that part
of the discussion.
These
are examples of questions which might be discussed in the conclusion
after summarizing.
2.
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3.
Problem Statement
The cathode ray
tube (CRT) has served and continues to serve a whole host of applications
ranging from the oscilloscope to the computer monitor. Arguably, the
CRT has had a tremendous impact on home entertainment, particularly
through the picture tube, that is, the television. Today, the CRT
as applied in televisions, and indeed in computer monitors, is experiencing
strong competition from displacement alternatives which include LCD
displays, projections systems, plasma screens, and others. Some of
the factors favouring these alternative products are large area display,
bright and sharply defined images, and size.
Your editor at
Scientific American has requested that you prepare a technical report
which describes the science/physics of the CRT, its range of applications
in home entertainment, and its limitations in the ever evolving modern
microelectronic world. Identify briefly the range of emerging alternatives
to the CRT, including those likely to emerge in the future. From these
choose two generically different alternatives and proceed to describe
the scientific basis of the selected projection devices. Compare and
contrast these alternatives and the CRT, discussing their strengths
and weaknesses in relation to their application for home entertainment.
In your dis¬cussion, consider factors such as energy consumption,
safety (radiation, eye strain, ...), and others. Conclude by assessing
the significance of the analysis (for example, in view of your analysis
what alternative(s) do you expect to dominate (or not) and the reasons
thereof).
The following
guideline is provided to assist you in the preparation of the report.
However, you are free to choose a structure that is most appropriate
for your presentation.
• The report
is intended for publication in a magazine such as Scientific American;
as such, the language of the report and the illustrative figures should
be accessible to intelligent non-technical or non-specialist readers.
In order to satisfy the readership of the magazine, however, the report
also needs to be technically rigorous and scientifically accurate.
• Your
report should include the following sections:
A. Introduction
- State the purpose of the report; explain the need for display
devices, briefly identify emerging alternative display devices - all
of this, not exclusively, but with an emphasis on the home entertainment
application.
B. Cathode
Ray Tube - Discuss the principle of operation, and establish
the limitations of the technology for current and future home entertainment
applications
C. Alternative
Display Devices - Discuss the principle of operation of two
alternative display devices which are generically different. Compare
and contrast (pros and cons, limitations (physical or otherwise),
advantages, versatility, future, ...) as mentioned above, with a specific
focus on the issues limiting the functionality of CRT based displays.
Contrast the two alternatives in relation to the CRT and discuss their
uniqueness, relevance, practicality, and economics.
D. Conclusion
– Summarize the findings of your research and analysis
of display technology, and state where you think the future of display
technology lies
NOTE:
1. Attend “Importance of Communication”
by Alan Chong on Wednesday, Jan 14th, 3pm to 4pm,
WB 116. This lecture will also include a discussion of the report
assignment.
2. Report
Outline: To be submitted in hard copy (to Engineering Communication
Centre at SFB670) and electronically (MicrosoftWord or WordPerfect
format, e-mail to <writing@ecf.utoronto.ca>)
before 4:00 pm on Friday Feb. 13th.
3. Report:
To be submitted in hard copy (to Engineering Communication Centre
at SFB670) and electronically (MicrosoftWord or WordPerfect format,
e-mail to <writing@ecf.utoronto.ca>)
before 4:00 pm on Friday Apr. 2nd. Appropriate documentation
and photocopies of all cited sources are also required.
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